Monday, June 29, 2009

Tyla's Holiday

The holidays are nearly here! Do you have anything special planned? Here's what Tyla got up to in the Easter holiday, it seems like such a long time ago but she just might give an idea on what you could do.

Friday, June 26, 2009

What Does Anger Feel Like?

Listen to Calvin's sense poem and you'll find out what anger feels like to him! Calvin really has some insightful thoughts.

If you want to write your own sense poem check out Jonita's post from the 19th of June 2009
. You'll find the format and how to get started to write your own sense poem. Listening to Calvin and Jonita's poem may even give you a few ideas to get you started.

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Isara's Alliteration Poem

We've been learning about some of the features of poetry. One of these features is alliteration. Alliteration is the repetition of an initial sound, for example, Isara ate electric eels. You can use alliteration to give your poem a mood or feeling. The mood could be scary, silly, happy almost any, it just depends on what words you choose. Here is a number alliteration poem from Isara. Calvin and Wyatt also have alliteration poems so why not listen to all three!

Monday, June 22, 2009

Wyatt's Holidays

Sometimes we get to choose which piece of writing we'd like to publish on our blog. This a is recount Wyatt wanted to share about the Easter Holidays. Listen and find out what Wyatt did in his Easter Holidays.

Friday, June 19, 2009

What Does Joy Feel Like?

Well, just listen to Jonita's sense poem and you'll find out what joy feels like to her! Jonita's brother Crusader wrote a sense poem about anger last year and now Jonita has written one about a completely different emotion. They may have written about different emotions but one thing they have in common is that they're both great writers.

If you want to write your own sense poem just follow this format. Think of an emotion first and then brainstorm what colour it reminds you of, what it would sound like, taste like, smell like, look like, feel like, and what it reminds you of. Use the format below and you'll have an awesome poem to share.


What colour is your emotion?

__________is __________like___________
What does it sound like?

It sounds like___________________

What does it taste like?

It tastes like_____________________

What does it smell like?

It smells like_____________________

What does it look like?

It looks_________________________

What does it feel like?
It feels like______________________
What does it remind you of?

It reminds of____________________

If you're really creative you could change the format or add more to it.

Here's Crusader's poem from last year...

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Shadow Puppets


Guess what! Our bay was full of wild animals! Well sort of, we learnt how to make shadow puppets and we made all sorts of animals.

Monday, June 15, 2009

A Simile Poem About Me

We've been learning about similes. Similes compare something to something else in order to create an image in the reader's mind, and include the words 'as…' or ' like …'. Similes are often used in poems to emphasize a point. You could write about yourself if you like you just need to brainstorm some ideas about what you are like ( fast, slow, loud, quiet, beautiful, clever, funny, silly or even crazy) and then think about think about things that remind you of that quality. Here is a simile poem written by Tyla.

Friday, June 12, 2009

Wednesday, June 10, 2009

A Number Poem

We've been learning about some of the features of poetry. One of these features is alliteration. Alliteration is the repetition of an initial sound, for example, Wyatt walked wildly while wearing a wig. You can use alliteration to give your poem a mood or feeling. The mood could be scary, silly, happy almost any, it just depends on what words you choose. Here is a number alliteration poem from Wyatt. What mood do you think Wyatt created?

Monday, June 8, 2009

Mini Golf

Do you like mini golf? Jonita and her family do! Listen and find out Jonita and her family got up too.

Thursday, June 4, 2009

Similes About Me

We've been learning about similes. Similes compare something to something else in order to create an image in the reader's mind, and include the words 'as…' or ' like …'. Similes are often used in poems to emphasize a point. You could write about yourself if you like you just need to brainstorm some ideas about what you are like ( fast, slow, loud, quiet, beautiful, clever, funny, silly or even crazy) and then think about think about things that remind you of that quality. Here is a simile poem written by Kaycee.

Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Tee Ball

Have you ever played tee ball? Isara has and he always has heaps of fun. Listen and find out...