Room 11 wrote about cookies and what they looked like, tasted like and smelt like. Here is a piece of delicious writing by Brooklyn. It's just as good as eating cookies. Well I think think so. :)
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3 comments:
What a great piece of writing about a cookie Brooklyn! I liked the way you used interesting similes like how the chocolate melted into a chocolate stream. That was very clever. Keep up the great work.
Love Miss Lavakula
what a lovey piece of writing Brooklyn and I liked you'r similes.
Hey Brooklyn
Loving your story abut the cookie.You have a really great story.
hope i hear from you again.
from katheen.Room18
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