Friday, October 17, 2008

Do you like Cookies? Brooklyn does!

Room 11 wrote about cookies and what they looked like, tasted like and smelt like. Here is a piece of delicious writing by Brooklyn. It's just as good as eating cookies. Well I think think so. :)


pesroom10 said...

What a great piece of writing about a cookie Brooklyn! I liked the way you used interesting similes like how the chocolate melted into a chocolate stream. That was very clever. Keep up the great work.

Love Miss Lavakula

Anonymous said...

what a lovey piece of writing Brooklyn and I liked you'r similes.

Anonymous said...

Hey Brooklyn

Loving your story abut the cookie.You have a really great story.

hope i hear from you again.

from katheen.Room18