Wednesday, May 27, 2009

An Allieration Poem

We've been learning about poetry in Room 11 this term. Here is a poem from Calvin using alliteration. Alliteration is the repetition of an initial sound, for example, Eight elegant elephants ate eggs in the evening.


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6 comments:

Room 10 Grey Lynn said...

Hi Calvin, I really liked the way you had all your alliterations based on numbers. How do you think them up? From Maia in Room 10 at Grey Lynn School.

Room10@Ptengland School said...

Hi Calvin,
We liked your alliteration poem. How did you know to write all those words?

From Room 10@Pt England School

Room 10 Grey Lynn said...

Dear Calvin,
I like how you made your alliterations sound so interesting. I thought you were very confident when you read your poem!
From Briar in Room 10 at Grey Lynn School.

Anonymous said...

That was a great blog,I think your better than me.From Tyla-Marie

Anonymous said...

Hi Calvin,i really like how you all your aliterations poem with smelly socks in it and think that your one is better than me.

from Shayne room11

Anonymous said...

Tino pai Calvin.That was a great story you wrote.From Tyla marie