tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9096194344178189397.post7712676376241936118..comments2023-06-30T01:15:31.299+12:00Comments on Pt England Scribes: The Hare and the TortoisePt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9096194344178189397.post-51607719786250846672009-11-13T14:20:14.780+13:002009-11-13T14:20:14.780+13:00I love the Tortoise and The Hare! You used a lot o...I love the Tortoise and The Hare! You used a lot of direct speech which helped to retell your story - well done Teresa. I think you could use your wonderful expressive voice when reading the dialogue more. This way we can appreciate your your super writing even more.<br />Miss GardenMiss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com